challenge for my fellow bloggers

alright I took this shot, which I think has great potential, but I'm not in love with it yet. So my fellow contagion bloggers have at it, do with it as you like, make it a masterpiece, give it your flare! The first is the original and the second is with a little adjustments (as I was fiddling on my lunch break), do as you please with either and repost!

I look forward to seeing this photo through your eyes!